Awful Intent Update: Chapter 26

I have now moved from the struggle into the resolution. It’s all down hill from here.  I expect the novel to be 70-80k words. The shortest novel I’ve written yet. But I always seem to add on most of my revisions. I hope to keep it shorter, but we’ll see.

Now you may ask, hey, how does that compare with other thrillers? Well, here are the lengths of a few of James Patterson’s.

Title Words
Honeymoon 65,572
4th of July 68,000
Lifeguard 71,634
Mary, Mary 72,426
Judge and Jury 74,288
Doublecross 70,753

And here are some more by some other authors.

Author Title Words
Lee Child Gone Tomorrow 146,000
Lee Child One Shot 124,000
Lee Child Killing Floor 162,000
Lee Child Persuader 164,000
Michael Connelly The Brass Verdict 145,000
Ridley Pearson Cut and Run 114,000
Robert Crais The Watchman 82,000
Robert Crais Taken 84,000
Robert Crais The First Rule 76,000
Robert Crais The Sentry 82,000
Brad Thor Full Black 117,000
Brad Thor Athena Project 102,000
Dean Koontz The Good Guy 93,000
Dean Koontz The Husband 94,000
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    Curse of a Dark God, book 2 of the Dark God series, can now be published!

    That’s the short version.

    Here’s the long version that will probably not be what you expect.  A little over nine months ago I initiated a contract termination with my publisher Tor Books.  A few days ago Tor reverted the rights. This means I have all the rights to all the books in the series back.

    But why would I initiate such a thing? Tor’s like THE publisher of science fiction and fantasy.

    There are a couple of factors, but I think the biggest issue is that we had differences in our vision for the story. This meant there were things I didn’t like about where the project was going and how it was progressing. It also meant there were things Tor didn’t like about the project and how it was progressing. This translated into some big delays. 

    We could have hung together–Tor never raised the idea of termination. But I saw no benefit in limping along. If things aren’t working, I tend to want them fixed. So after I raised the issue, all involved agreed that a termination of the agreement would be the best option.

    And although all of us were disappointed it didn’t work out, this was an amicable parting. Tor went to bat for me with Macmillan, their overlord, to get this thing done. And we ended up with, I feel, a fair agreement. Of course, my agent was a valuable resource every step of the way.

    I don’t look at these last years as a loss. The series was introduced to thousands of readers. And I learned a number of valuable things about the business and craft working on this project with the folks at Tor. We’re farther along now that we were, even if we didn’t take the rocket ship to the stars.

    Most importantly, the good news is that for those of you who have been waiting, I can now move forward! The series will be published by Blacksword Books, my own imprint. We’ll start with e-book and trade paperback formats. Both will be available online from Amazon, Barnes&Noble, and other retailers. Once that’s rolling, we’ll look to see if audio is feasible.

    I’m very excited about CURSE. My agent loved it. I loved it. My early readers have loved it. I think all of you who enjoyed SERVANT will enjoy this just as much if not more.

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