Come say hello at CONduit this weekend

This Friday and Saturday, May 28-29

I’m going to be participating at CONduit (Utah’s longest-running and largest general science fiction and fantasy convention) again this year. It’s being held at the Radisson just east of the Gateway shopping center.

Radisson Hotel
215 W. South Temple
Salt Lake City, UT 84101
(801) 531-7500

The list of authors and artists you can meet there is quite long, including BARBARA HAMBLY! They will have panels and workshops on everything from ghost hunting to chain mail. For more info, see the programming schedule.

My CONduit Schedule

  • FRIDAY – 2:00 PM – Cartography for Stories
  • FRIDAY – 4:00 PM  – Reading from CURSE OF A DARK GOD or SERVANT OF A DARK GOD (1/2 hour)
  • FRIDAY – 5:00 PM – A Writer’s Life
  • SATURDAY – 11:00 AM – SIGNING
  • SATURDAY – 4:00 PM – Writing the Rogue
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    yea.

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    Servant Sketch 1 cave Servant Sketch 2 horse ensemble

    Servant Sketch 3 ensemble Servant Sketch 4 cave

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    Servant WIP 1

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    Servant WIP 3

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    Servant WIP 4

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    Servant Final

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10 Comments

  1. Bah, I wish I could come, but it couldn’t fall on a worse weekend for me. You know, the Father’s and Son’s, two families in the neighborhood moving, a birthday party for my niece, and a birthday party for my son. Work next week will feel like a vacation.

  2. Man, I wish I could have made CONduit this year. I’ve never been before. Next year the goal is to get both CONduit and LTUE, so I’m sure we’ll be seeing a lot of each other. Also, why didn’t you call me about hotel rooms? You know I’ve got your hookup! 😀

  3. Bryce,

    Yeah, well, I didn’t want to be a sponge. But since you’re twisting my arm, I’ll make sure I ask next time. Thanks so much. CONduit is good. LTUE seems to be more writing focused. But hopefully we’ll see you next year.

  4. This makes me wish I lived in Utah.

    All of my new favorite writers are in your neck of the nation. Perhaps when you have a few more books under your belt you shall grace us in New England with your presence. 🙂

  5. Thanks for coming to Conduit, John Brown! The panel on life as a writer was especially insightful. Are you going to come again next year?

  6. Nicholas,

    I’ll be at every LTUE and CONduit until they bar me at the door 🙂 Glad to hear the panel helped. It’s always nice to meet folks and chat about writing.

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