John’s appearance at American Fork writing conference cancelled

Folks, just wanted to update any who might be planning on attending my sessions at the American Fork Arts Council writing conference. I’ve had to cancel. There’s been a death in the family. My brother-in-law’s three week old son died yesterday. His name was Landry. I’ll be at the funeral up in Cokeville, Wyoming on Saturday. What a very, very hard thing for them. I was so looking forward to participating in the conference, but these folks need solace and support. I’m sure you understand. I hope to attend next year. And I will be presenting at CONduit in May, although the organizers haven’t gotten back yet with details. I’m sure you’ll still have a great time–there are so many other interesting presenters coming. Happiness.

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  1. I’m so sorry John. Please send along my condolences. I can only imagine how hard that must be for them. I’ve got a one year old and that would be the end of me…again, so sorry.

  2. It makes you want to focus on living now. That’s one thing I think athiests have on many of us belivers–the mindset suggests it’s unwise to put the things that matter off until a later time because there might not be a later.

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