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Your local zombie author appears on Writing Excuses, Plus the Writing Debrief explained

After a cancerous death, I appeared on Writing Excuses this week to groan and hold forth with the guys on writing second novels and second books in a series.

During the podcast I talked about my practice of debriefing after every writing project. A reader just asked what that was, and so I thought I’d explain it here.

The debrief is a simple thing. I learned it back when I worked as a business consultant. It always provides great insights. Sometimes  it provides massive insights. The principle is to pull back and look at the big picture every once in a while. So here’s what I do. When I finish a project, I sit down and simply list out what I struggled with, what went well, and anything I learned. I list out things I’d do again that worked particularly well and things I’d do differently. This might be about craft or process. Sometimes I might take some time to reflect on the nature of story and read a favorite book about the craft or perform a story analysis on another movie or book. Then I write up my insights in a form that I can read later and know what the heck I’m talking about. This can take a few hours or a few days. This last debrief after draft 3 of CURSE coincided with my preparation for a day-long workshop I had agreed to give on story, and so the insights came thick and fast. I recommend the practice highly.

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3 Comments

  1. John;

    I loved the last couple of WE episodes you were on. I have even forgiven you for making me read Jude The Obscure, though I am still scarred for life from it.
    I am still eagerly awaiting YOUR second book. Why must the publishing industry torture us with such slow release dates?

    Jon (the other one)

  2. Wow. They must have been reeeeeel good 🙂

    I’m eagerly awaiting my second book as well. Alas, later this week I’m going to make a post that’s not going to make anyone happy.

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