Servant cover art

The cover illustration for SERVANT is finished!

(and there was much rejoicing.)

yea.

Actually, there was DANCING. Because I think the final piece rocks. The artist is Victor Minguez. Here are two of his pieces that I really enjoy.

The first is “Angel.” I love the bright contrast, the face, and the fact that there’s so much rich detail.

The next is “Champagne Havoc.” Again, a wonderful face, but also an awesome idea (a robot carrying a woman in the palm of its hand), and then the lines and chopper give the whole piece a lot of energy.

Click here to see other works in his portfolio.

So we kicked the project off by me sharing the goals I had for the cover and tons of reference on everything from color scheme to character costume. I asked Victor to develop some concepts for an ensemble of Hunger, Sugar, and Talen as well as some for the cave scene towards the end of the book. He came back with these sketches.

Servant Sketch 1 cave Servant Sketch 2 horse ensemble

Servant Sketch 3 ensemble Servant Sketch 4 cave

I liked the first because it would allow us to see the figure’s faces more clearly. And there was a lot of interesting detail with the cave. Look at the roots by the entrance. I also liked the structure. I liked the third because it included Hunger, and Victor was taking Hunger in a new direction. I also thought we could do some neat things with the energy of Sugar on the horse and that long sash. The fourth one, however, just felt right. It had so much potential energy. I was immediately drawn to the body language. And so this is the one we decided to develop.  Then one of my beta art viewers suggested moving closer and putting in more strong diagonals. It was a perfect idea. Victor agreed and came back with this.

 

Servant WIP 1

I liked the lines of her stance but wondered if she needed something stronger with her legs. Victor adjusted, but my idea just wasn’t an improvement.

Servant WIP 2

So we decided to stick with the previous version. However, this was all too dark. Way too much gray. When looking at things in thumbnail, the cover has to pop. I shared more reference images. And Victor went back and delivered this.

Servant WIP 3

Boom! That was exactly what I was looking for. Bright, dynamic. However, we needed a more neutral bit at the top for the title and author’s name. And the brightest spot had to be behind Sugar to draw the eye to her. Here was the next version.

Servant WIP 4

At this point I started to dance. This was IT! There was a lot going on here. We had the high contrast I wanted. We had the energy. The wind with the hair and leaves and sash and torch all add kinetic energy. As do all the diagonals. Notice as well the cave details–we have hints at previous habitation, runes, and some interesting contrast with the dark foreground. I had shared a number of N.C. Wyeth and Tim and Greg Hildebrandt pieces as reference, and I think this captured elements of those and gave them a new twist. Note as well the sharp projections on Sugar’s behind. Victor put them in there purely for aesthetic reasons. He had no idea what they were. I loved them. He loved them. They worked. We would just have to make them make sense.

After a few more iterations, he delivered the final.

Servant Final

I think it’s gorgeous. And will advertise the book perfectly. In a few days I will reveal the final cover with title etc. Shortly after that, SERVANT will be available again to please English readers worldwide.

 

 

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6 Comments

  1. This is AMAZING!!!!!!!! Love the colors and the emotions on the character’s faces. It has such a sense of motion too. This is a great cover. I was skeptical you’d be able to get something better than the original cover, but I think you’ve done it.

  2. So glad to hear you like it, Jared. As you can tell, I’m very pleased with it as well. Looking forward to the cover for CURSE. Give us about 4 weeks.

  3. Best wishes on your efforts. Stunning. I agree, it is lovely and eye-catching! Good work John.

  4. Wow. I am impressed. I like the original cover art, but this is great. I do not know if many independent authors could pull this off as well as you have. This may kick off a trend among indie authors since yours turned out so well.

  5. Hunger would have been fabulous. But we must never say never. If we sell gobs of the books in this series, you can be sure I will commission extra color and black and white artwork to be included in the books.

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