Goodies from Curse of a Dark God

Bow to the dark god, ye minions. Here’s some of what’s coming in book 2:

  • The dogmen of Toth and their maulers
  • The Ungar and the one they call Ruin
  • The tanglewoods of the woodikin
  • Firesteeds
  • Gloryweaves
  • Nashrud the hunter
  • And last, but not least, the Orange-eyed priest of Mungo

The end is in sight on the first draft of book 2 in the Dark God series, and because this one has been a roller coaster, I had to post some of the coolness before I have to go back into frantic mode. My word count estimates for this book have been so consistently off it hasn’t been funny. Literally. It’s made me panic and stress. It should clock in around 220k. And then it’s going to be cut, cut, cut.

In the meantime…dogmen of Toth (give it the James Earl Jones).

Oh, baby.

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2 Comments

  1. I want to know what all of that means, because from your teaser section here on the site, I still have no idea.

    dogmen of Toth, get the James Earl Jones? A good deep voice?

  2. No, and you won’t have any idea after reading book 1 either. Dang it. You’ll have to read book 2.

    Mwuhahaha

    Heck, the first seven chapters (what I got permission to post on the site) barely get book 1 going.

    Yes, the JEJ is a deep voice.

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